tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post2342776524311443692..comments2023-09-20T15:14:58.778-04:00Comments on Carmen DeSousa: "He Couldn't be Gone" Excerpt from ENTANGLED DREAMS:Carmen DeSousahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-55601882301996379722012-06-03T22:06:05.479-04:002012-06-03T22:06:05.479-04:00Fabulous hook. I must read more to see what happen...Fabulous hook. I must read more to see what happens. Great job.Keira Kohlhttp://www.keirakohl.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-24006794144729393172012-06-03T16:19:54.427-04:002012-06-03T16:19:54.427-04:00Thank you, Elin.Thank you, Elin.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-65915340559721880182012-06-03T16:19:03.206-04:002012-06-03T16:19:03.206-04:00Thank you, Veronica. I struggle with whether I'...Thank you, Veronica. I struggle with whether I'm too sad sometimes, but it is life. As I said, I do write modern-day fairytales. Have an awesome day.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-25157340169948365822012-06-03T16:17:17.038-04:002012-06-03T16:17:17.038-04:00Thank you, Ann. Isn't that how it always happe...Thank you, Ann. Isn't that how it always happens. One minute you're just going about your day... Seems to me I know someone else who does that. LOL! So excited for your new release.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-68125993583914295542012-06-03T14:33:42.609-04:002012-06-03T14:33:42.609-04:00What a hook! Excellent.What a hook! Excellent.Elin Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09467512757347720397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-26399928876058991582012-06-03T14:23:12.721-04:002012-06-03T14:23:12.721-04:00Sad, very emotional - we've all had those mome...Sad, very emotional - we've all had those moments with the phone call we're dreading. Very well done six!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10092079715013925609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-84781518752422883952012-06-03T14:19:55.340-04:002012-06-03T14:19:55.340-04:00Oh, this is excellent. I like how you set up a no...Oh, this is excellent. I like how you set up a normal everyday scene with just a couple of sentences, then blow it all to pieces with a phone call!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-84503649817647006172012-06-03T13:38:03.366-04:002012-06-03T13:38:03.366-04:00Thanks for commenting, Kate. Yes, I do feel bad fo...Thanks for commenting, Kate. Yes, I do feel bad for her, but life happens. I hope you'll return next week as I continue through the first chapter.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-4220046631001649862012-06-03T13:36:34.333-04:002012-06-03T13:36:34.333-04:00Isn't that a horrible way to contact your step...Isn't that a horrible way to contact your stepdaughter, but then again, that's why she refers to Lilith as Cruella.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-21046477473846687212012-06-03T13:04:17.786-04:002012-06-03T13:04:17.786-04:00Poor Nicky! I hope he's not gone yet. Maybe ...Poor Nicky! I hope he's not gone yet. Maybe she will get a chance to say goodbye.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-79909132881700129572012-06-03T09:37:15.288-04:002012-06-03T09:37:15.288-04:00Well that's just messed up. Hate to get calls ...Well that's just messed up. Hate to get calls from people you don't deal with on a regular bases because you know it can only mean one thing...Poor Nicky! Great six!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02416124099245361057noreply@blogger.com