tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post7769858566072619166..comments2023-09-20T15:14:58.778-04:00Comments on Carmen DeSousa: First look at new WIP ENTANGLED DREAMS~ ExcerptCarmen DeSousahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-28532555852551460082012-04-30T11:13:29.424-04:002012-04-30T11:13:29.424-04:00Jess, I like that... "when things get...wet&q...Jess, I like that... "when things get...wet".<br /><br />Zee, I wonder...would you have known from those six little lines that a monsoon would soon hit, or because I told you. I think we would. I think we know there is no such thing as a perfect fairytale. In to every life a little rain must fall or we wouldn't appreciate the sunshine.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-58909138798298303652012-04-30T11:10:19.586-04:002012-04-30T11:10:19.586-04:00Ah, so true. You cannot feel pain if you don't...Ah, so true. You cannot feel pain if you don't feel love and vice versa, I believe. You must identify and feel some kind of attachment to understand a person's pain. And if you've never experienced pain, how will you know what true joy is.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-39927143259162762532012-04-30T11:06:25.795-04:002012-04-30T11:06:25.795-04:00They simply must, Melynda. LOL! No one is looking ...They simply must, Melynda. LOL! No one is looking for the perfect family, the faultless relationship. We crave adventure and seek those willing to stand up, brush off their backside, and overcome. At least I do. ;)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-80655176967848726292012-04-30T11:03:45.508-04:002012-04-30T11:03:45.508-04:00Thank you, Veronica. This one is a little differen...Thank you, Veronica. This one is a little different than the other two, but yes, I try to give my characters the strength to carry on and find hope.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-48935518532230418932012-04-30T11:01:15.485-04:002012-04-30T11:01:15.485-04:00Me too, Ann! It keeps me turning the pages, so I h...Me too, Ann! It keeps me turning the pages, so I hope to do the same for my readers, and according to my Beta readers, this novel did just that. I hope you'll agree. ;)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-53147877071326492532012-04-30T02:03:39.409-04:002012-04-30T02:03:39.409-04:00Oh no, this sounds so ominous... The poor girlOh no, this sounds so ominous... The poor girlZee Monodeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03709226882459365836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-28581173238396879412012-04-29T19:32:44.635-04:002012-04-29T19:32:44.635-04:00I like the fact that you've given her some hap...I like the fact that you've given her some happy memories to hold onto when things get ... wet. Nice six.Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-52821608143456687462012-04-29T17:30:32.557-04:002012-04-29T17:30:32.557-04:00Love your six! We have a wonderful sense of their...Love your six! We have a wonderful sense of their lives and care about them before the monsoon hits. :)patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-85523198351900110582012-04-29T15:02:19.329-04:002012-04-29T15:02:19.329-04:00Beautiful imagery in this six! Like the others, I ...Beautiful imagery in this six! Like the others, I suspect things are going to take a turn here :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-11174391426200468632012-04-29T12:25:01.976-04:002012-04-29T12:25:01.976-04:00Yes, I DO know you bring rain into your characters...Yes, I DO know you bring rain into your characters' lives, not that they aren't strong enough to handle it and triumph! Will enjoy reading more of this story, lovely beginning...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-48374318820560008082012-04-29T12:14:23.121-04:002012-04-29T12:14:23.121-04:00Very nice, I love it when things appear to be perf...Very nice, I love it when things appear to be perfect, and then all you-know-what breaks loose!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-60381415453094520792012-04-29T11:49:28.512-04:002012-04-29T11:49:28.512-04:00Yes, and sometimes, both shoes must drop. I prefer...Yes, and sometimes, both shoes must drop. I prefer them to be shoeless. LOL! Thank you for visiting! I'm making my way around, but Internet is responding very slow. Must be all this peeps checking out SSS posts. ;)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-38436953149384082152012-04-29T11:46:33.943-04:002012-04-29T11:46:33.943-04:00Thank you, Kate. And yes, because people can not i...Thank you, Kate. And yes, because people can not impede themselves from looking at a train wreck. I've learned through trial and error no one wants to read about a perfect life or existence; deep down we crave the tragedy, so we can appreciate the happily ever after. Of course, with me, even the ending doesn't always work out perfectly for all involved. ;)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-22296200275889076652012-04-29T11:42:37.223-04:002012-04-29T11:42:37.223-04:00Soon, my beta reading friend, soon! But first a li...Soon, my beta reading friend, soon! But first a little teasing is a must. Gotta make you want it. LOL!Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-46942578269254053112012-04-29T10:11:06.597-04:002012-04-29T10:11:06.597-04:00I'm just waiting for the shoe to drop. Great w...I'm just waiting for the shoe to drop. Great writing,as always.<br />Best<br />Jo-AnnAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-22351244161390657712012-04-29T10:06:50.583-04:002012-04-29T10:06:50.583-04:00I like them. Does it have to be a monsoon? Well ...I like them. Does it have to be a monsoon? Well what must be, must be, and I trust you to know what to do.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.com