tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post1925971016550861386..comments2023-09-20T15:14:58.778-04:00Comments on Carmen DeSousa: She may be in the wrong place again--or is she? Excerpt from WHEN NOONDAY ENDSCarmen DeSousahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-12915059695769213982013-02-03T15:11:29.523-05:002013-02-03T15:11:29.523-05:00Thank you, Veronica. So good to see you. I've ...<br />Thank you, Veronica. So good to see you. I've been away from my PC, but trying to make my rounds. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-88964055333950281052013-02-03T15:10:32.761-05:002013-02-03T15:10:32.761-05:00
Well, Siobhan, you never know. Often, good things...<br />Well, Siobhan, you never know. Often, good things come from mistakes, and you never know with me. LOL! :) Thanks for stopping by my place. Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-54398454890683046112013-02-03T15:09:23.853-05:002013-02-03T15:09:23.853-05:00Thank you, Teresa! I had to snip a few lines, but ...Thank you, Teresa! I had to snip a few lines, but that's a good thing. I tend to ramble when I have 70-100k words. Though, I try not to any more than is necessary. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-11635955761376247902013-02-03T14:25:32.615-05:002013-02-03T14:25:32.615-05:00I can certainly see the room right along with her ...I can certainly see the room right along with her - terrific description! An intriguing excerpt for sure...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-21483177810126874242013-02-03T13:45:25.811-05:002013-02-03T13:45:25.811-05:00Oh that can't be good. Great snippet, Carmen. ...Oh that can't be good. Great snippet, Carmen. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-49183959731109280432013-02-03T12:10:55.536-05:002013-02-03T12:10:55.536-05:00Thank you, Amy. I tried to *imagine* myself in tha...Thank you, Amy. I tried to *imagine* myself in that situation. ;)<br /><br />Yeah...she's a little concerned and still a little hungover. Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-37079404378310032132013-02-03T11:38:18.104-05:002013-02-03T11:38:18.104-05:00Fantastic, Carmen. You paint such a great visual!...Fantastic, Carmen. You paint such a great visual! <br /><br />"A hotel room." lol, love it! Great snippet :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-16090392033580800502013-02-03T11:37:08.289-05:002013-02-03T11:37:08.289-05:00Love all the vivid description, and the slow "...Love all the vivid description, and the slow "dawning" of where she was. Great job!Kelly's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02670823346986342594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-20822944551300172812013-02-03T10:50:57.162-05:002013-02-03T10:50:57.162-05:00Thank you, Krystal. That is always my hope. And tr...Thank you, Krystal. That is always my hope. And trust me, you WILL NOT believe what she sees next in the room. HeHeHe!!! My beta said, "What?"<br /><br />Have a great weekend!<br /><br />Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-7380418041418481462013-02-03T10:49:21.371-05:002013-02-03T10:49:21.371-05:00Thank you, Ann. I had to drop a couple of sentence...Thank you, Ann. I had to drop a couple of sentences, but I was hoping the reader would *hear* the whir of that window unit. As always, I'll add the few extra sentences tomorrow. I loved your sample, and I'll look forward to reading it. If I have enough time, maybe I can beta for you. I can only fit in a few, but I'd love to do one with you. Great writing, my friend! :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-90658841530927600142013-02-03T10:46:44.250-05:002013-02-03T10:46:44.250-05:00I hope, I hope, I hope!!! That is my master plan.....I hope, I hope, I hope!!! That is my master plan... :)Thank you for stopping by and commenting. Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-37207418395305647762013-02-03T10:40:53.622-05:002013-02-03T10:40:53.622-05:00Love the end! I need to know more. Great Sneak Pee...Love the end! I need to know more. Great Sneak Peek!Krystal Shannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478131510301467364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-26190909986465155002013-02-03T09:42:51.375-05:002013-02-03T09:42:51.375-05:00Yep, I'm there, right in that motel room, too....Yep, I'm there, right in that motel room, too. Great visuals!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-41785430014376561362013-02-03T09:37:09.930-05:002013-02-03T09:37:09.930-05:00Age old secrets and a murderous family, you have m...Age old secrets and a murderous family, you have me hooked!! Great 8, Carmen!!Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.com