tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post2072188330225874718..comments2023-09-20T15:14:58.778-04:00Comments on Carmen DeSousa: “What if I don’t want it to end?” Excerpt from LAND OF THE NOONDAY SUN:Carmen DeSousahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-71958398066260374552012-05-27T20:12:54.194-04:002012-05-27T20:12:54.194-04:00The last line here is a fantactic hook. Well done ...The last line here is a fantactic hook. Well done :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-76778085813353518702012-05-27T17:42:53.150-04:002012-05-27T17:42:53.150-04:00Great conversation!Great conversation!Damiana Alderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03502688945912991880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-59699368406767279582012-05-27T15:41:10.734-04:002012-05-27T15:41:10.734-04:00Aww, very nice six!Aww, very nice six!Suzan Butlerhttp://www.suzanbutler.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-57473053218364293572012-05-27T15:05:36.399-04:002012-05-27T15:05:36.399-04:00That's sweet. Why does it have to end? I'...That's sweet. Why does it have to end? I'm with him on this. Unless he's just being hypothetical.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-83916365464231812042012-05-27T14:10:00.829-04:002012-05-27T14:10:00.829-04:00Very romantic and sweet six sentences.Very romantic and sweet six sentences.Jenna Stormhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12004059347853255095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-75478185632742245392012-05-27T13:42:40.535-04:002012-05-27T13:42:40.535-04:00I love the lightness and sweetness of this scene. ...I love the lightness and sweetness of this scene. Best of luck with your release!Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-67263788114979153422012-05-27T13:16:25.185-04:002012-05-27T13:16:25.185-04:00Excellent excerpt, I really like the different emo...Excellent excerpt, I really like the different emotional levels between the two characters!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-32134727766613707212012-05-27T13:13:52.551-04:002012-05-27T13:13:52.551-04:00Sweet, romantic six, Carmen.Sweet, romantic six, Carmen.Mackenzie Crownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14495228596521457813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-44958207192592483582012-05-27T13:11:31.906-04:002012-05-27T13:11:31.906-04:00Thank you, Lorraine. He's one of my fav protag...Thank you, Lorraine. He's one of my fav protags. Tragic past, full of life, and passionate. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-78105538495727210822012-05-27T13:09:31.940-04:002012-05-27T13:09:31.940-04:00Thank you, Alix. I'm so glad you liked it.Thank you, Alix. I'm so glad you liked it.Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-18637872293230761932012-05-27T13:08:58.209-04:002012-05-27T13:08:58.209-04:00Thank you, Britt!Thank you, Britt!Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-28416599405094820242012-05-27T13:03:28.341-04:002012-05-27T13:03:28.341-04:00Thank you, Elin. That is exactly what I was hoping...Thank you, Elin. That is exactly what I was hoping to portray. It's not always easy to take six lines out of an MS and make it flow. Easier when I'm going week by week, but I jumped back into this one after being away for a few weeks. Appreciate the feedback!Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-81389856048675795112012-05-27T10:29:45.748-04:002012-05-27T10:29:45.748-04:00Aw, I love him. :) What a great way to finish yo...Aw, I love him. :) What a great way to finish your six: "What if I don't want it to end?" So sweet.patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-23593270050526217372012-05-27T10:08:11.980-04:002012-05-27T10:08:11.980-04:00I'm echoing here, but beautifully romantic. Gr...I'm echoing here, but beautifully romantic. Great six!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13487595361324166366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-5014268090776207162012-05-27T08:38:21.942-04:002012-05-27T08:38:21.942-04:00Sweet romance! Great SSS!Sweet romance! Great SSS!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14560119553556581128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-9587227445104312202012-05-27T07:37:02.872-04:002012-05-27T07:37:02.872-04:00I agree with Elin, very romantic. Nothing like a m...I agree with Elin, very romantic. Nothing like a man who's determined to see a matter through, especially when it comes to the woman he wants.M.J. Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06796479140761752446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-7908899602918219222012-05-27T05:13:15.819-04:002012-05-27T05:13:15.819-04:00Lovely natural dialogue - and very romantic. Nice ...Lovely natural dialogue - and very romantic. Nice 6.Elin Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09467512757347720397noreply@blogger.com