tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post6325227617998462826..comments2023-09-20T15:14:58.778-04:00Comments on Carmen DeSousa: 500 and Counting ~ Scene 2 ~ The Gas Stop (Help write a story)Carmen DeSousahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-10986725337136726622012-07-03T11:42:19.239-04:002012-07-03T11:42:19.239-04:00Thank you, Marie and MJ, for your comments. New sc...Thank you, Marie and MJ, for your comments. New scene tomorrow will incorporate both of your suggestions, so I'll be getting with you about your free book. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-78987705601218493942012-06-27T19:41:24.001-04:002012-06-27T19:41:24.001-04:00That was great! Let me see if I can continue...
I...That was great! Let me see if I can continue...<br /><br />If the unexpected scent was not enough, he's halfway to his desk when his partner intercepts him. There's a call out. Double homicide of a middle age couple. When they arrive at the scene, its an exact replica from the pictures of his grandparents murders. The killer is back....and in he's in his neck of the woods.MJ Kanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-56220700361074530772012-06-27T15:35:39.470-04:002012-06-27T15:35:39.470-04:00Awesome! I love using scents, as it is our most po...Awesome! I love using scents, as it is our most powerful form of recall. Great idea to link back to the dream. I'm using it. :))Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-62783673938953494352012-06-27T11:54:27.092-04:002012-06-27T11:54:27.092-04:00Gino was pulling into the parking lot of the polic...Gino was pulling into the parking lot of the police station, when he caught a whiff of cologne. It wasn't his brand and the car windows were closed so he wasn't picking up the smell from the outside. It reminded him of an aftershave commercial from T.V. He never used this brand, but someone he loved did.He turned around quickly, expecting to see his grandfather, but he was alone in the car.Marie Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07275544861810872122noreply@blogger.com