tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post7907396809839322345..comments2023-09-20T15:14:58.778-04:00Comments on Carmen DeSousa: First peek at SPLIT DECISIONS, follow up to SHE BELONGS TO ME. #8Sunday #SneakPeekSunday Carmen DeSousahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-35355877756387148732013-03-10T19:11:33.056-04:002013-03-10T19:11:33.056-04:00Sounds intriguing. I wonder what is really going o...Sounds intriguing. I wonder what is really going on here, or what seems to be going on. I'll be back next week.HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-87983235677429549602013-03-10T18:46:12.084-04:002013-03-10T18:46:12.084-04:00Interesting! Lots of tension and unanswered questi...Interesting! Lots of tension and unanswered questions in my mind. Mainly...what's going on? Does someone have a hold of her? Makes me want to keep reading.Anna Zabohttp://www.annazabo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-74814810546767181452013-03-10T17:52:26.212-04:002013-03-10T17:52:26.212-04:00Wow ~ I can't wait to find out what's goin...Wow ~ I can't wait to find out what's going on!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-64044299429895221982013-03-10T17:38:40.489-04:002013-03-10T17:38:40.489-04:00Thanks, Veronica! Hopefully all will go according ...Thanks, Veronica! Hopefully all will go according to plan, and it'll be right on time. LOL!!! :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-86556230790785839292013-03-10T12:57:55.038-04:002013-03-10T12:57:55.038-04:00Very tense scene, definitely makes me want to read...Very tense scene, definitely makes me want to read more right away. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-18303193204492540142013-03-10T12:11:17.083-04:002013-03-10T12:11:17.083-04:00LOL! That is what I like to hear, Terry! After all...LOL! That is what I like to hear, Terry! After all, my bio does say... "All of my novels are sensual, but not erotic, gripping but not graphic and will make you cry, laugh, love, and hope." <br /><br />I'm glad to see I'm doing my job, but I do apologize for the crying part, even though I know we all like a good cry once in a while. But...I try to always leave you with a smile. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-90874018725559060932013-03-10T11:43:19.657-04:002013-03-10T11:43:19.657-04:00Oh Carmen!!! I would have never thought eight sent...Oh Carmen!!! I would have never thought eight sentences would make me beg for more...BUT begging I am!!! HURRY I so want to read this one!!! I can not wait. The way you tell a story is so gripping and has me in tears at times, yelling at the screen as I read, and even smiling and crying at the same time! Now that is TALENT in my opinion!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-24366297930108388732013-03-10T10:36:22.731-04:002013-03-10T10:36:22.731-04:00Thank your for commenting... I hope it makes sense...Thank your for commenting... I hope it makes sense, and that you caught the fact that a young child could not understand what was happening. <br /><br />It was the image that came into my mind...what a child might think as their mother shakes them. Again, it's sad to think that it happens to 3-y-o children, and I do keep the scene very short, as you saw the dad walks in. :(Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-42194825483039364082013-03-10T10:07:00.455-04:002013-03-10T10:07:00.455-04:00Kitchen cabinets doing jumping jacks...now that...Kitchen cabinets doing jumping jacks...now that's an interesting visual!Meloniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06816058375245712743noreply@blogger.com