tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post8004516929155115199..comments2023-09-20T15:14:58.778-04:00Comments on Carmen DeSousa: "You promised nobody would ever hurt me!" SPLIT DECISIONS #8Sunday #SneakPeekSundayCarmen DeSousahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14802237651430170152noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-16949553611338910112013-03-18T10:40:04.041-04:002013-03-18T10:40:04.041-04:00Thank you, Teresa. I'm so pleased you enjoyed ...Thank you, Teresa. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the excerpt. It's hard to know how much to share as you know, hoping the reader will understand. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-58299883808038279872013-03-18T09:55:33.452-04:002013-03-18T09:55:33.452-04:00Immediately gripping, Carmen.It pulled me into her...Immediately gripping, Carmen.It pulled me into her situation--and I felt her fear--terror even, and her confusion. Nice snippet. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-91988653142238555092013-03-18T08:39:53.557-04:002013-03-18T08:39:53.557-04:00I'm sorry, Kate. But I did warn you. :( I hate...I'm sorry, Kate. But I did warn you. :( I hate that I have to start with tragedy, but I honestly think it reveals why my characters are the way they are. Next week is distressing, but not sad so to speak. I hope you'll come back. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-9492591988469102142013-03-18T08:38:11.907-04:002013-03-18T08:38:11.907-04:00Thank you, Frank! I appreciate the feedback. :)Thank you, Frank! I appreciate the feedback. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-3822419390284374742013-03-18T08:37:47.948-04:002013-03-18T08:37:47.948-04:00I know...isn't that horrible? Poor girl. I'...I know...isn't that horrible? Poor girl. I'm so mean to my characters. Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-50103161404829339792013-03-18T08:36:59.835-04:002013-03-18T08:36:59.835-04:00Thank you, Ann. Loved yours...very descriptive. :)...Thank you, Ann. Loved yours...very descriptive. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-39998730043518488012013-03-17T23:20:32.249-04:002013-03-17T23:20:32.249-04:00How terribly sad!How terribly sad!Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-31022038103077238922013-03-17T20:56:41.989-04:002013-03-17T20:56:41.989-04:00Real grabber!
Kudos!Real grabber!<br />Kudos!FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-39013882335552245552013-03-17T19:57:55.162-04:002013-03-17T19:57:55.162-04:00A great and emotional snippet. The last sentence i...A great and emotional snippet. The last sentence is one that completely guts... a day too late. :(Anna Zabohttp://www.annazabo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-6822285539945462702013-03-17T15:20:51.627-04:002013-03-17T15:20:51.627-04:00Excellent snippet, as always!Excellent snippet, as always!Ann Swannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08826695313958091226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-59462014536849889982013-03-17T15:10:00.643-04:002013-03-17T15:10:00.643-04:00And that's a good thing, right? I think I wro...And that's a good thing, right? I think I wrote that for another author's review... "Love when I feel passion and pain." <br /><br />Hope you'll stop back next week...I think you'll like it, especially since you read 'She Belongs to Me'. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-57207297891603878692013-03-17T15:07:11.002-04:002013-03-17T15:07:11.002-04:00LOL, Terry! And we're only sixteen sentences i...LOL, Terry! And we're only sixteen sentences in. Of course, you probably remember that story from book one. Sad that she has to relive it, but you'll see why next week. Wait to be shocked, starting with sentence number seventeen. I'm so excited about this book too. It's my second book...even though publishing fifth. And it's always been my beta readers and my favorite. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-34971483561932356102013-03-17T15:03:49.073-04:002013-03-17T15:03:49.073-04:00Thank you, Elaine. Yes, very intense. As sad as it...Thank you, Elaine. Yes, very intense. As sad as it is, our past are a part of us. So even though they're sad, I feel they are needed. We appreciate our 'happily ever after' when we have to fight for it. :)Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-21452541380564628132013-03-17T15:00:42.804-04:002013-03-17T15:00:42.804-04:00Thank you, Anne. I tried to give only a little bit...Thank you, Anne. I tried to give only a little bit. I hate when children are in pain, but sadly, it's a reality. Carmen DeSousahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08835462755654747169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-29727591529547207482013-03-17T12:39:51.459-04:002013-03-17T12:39:51.459-04:00Dramatic, intriguing, you made me feel her pain, e...Dramatic, intriguing, you made me feel her pain, excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-60193408336780144992013-03-17T12:00:58.781-04:002013-03-17T12:00:58.781-04:00Oh my!!! HURRY!!! I have to have this book!!!Oh my!!! HURRY!!! I have to have this book!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-9388826623692635752013-03-17T11:31:22.365-04:002013-03-17T11:31:22.365-04:00So intense. Nice excerpt.So intense. Nice excerpt.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9119615232600399164.post-47554449554549669182013-03-17T10:31:24.549-04:002013-03-17T10:31:24.549-04:00Very gripping. Nicely done.Very gripping. Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com