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"Prelude to a First Kiss" excerpt from bestselling romantic-suspense SHE BELONGS TO ME





He had wanted to kiss her something fierce. His entire being longed for her, and he could see she was attracted to him as well, but he’d restrained himself. Something told him this might be his last first-kiss. It should be special, not standing in a parking lot. Still, the emotions were powerful.


He wanted to sprint up to her once she pulled in her driveway, but he couldn’t. She’d run in terror. She would definitely think he was stalking her. He would have to be patient. But he didn’t know if he could. Jaynee had gotten under his skin, unlike no women ever had. Letting her go wasn’t an option.



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  1. His last first-kiss? *happy sigh*

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  2. Last first kisses are just as important as the actual first kiss....dreamy!

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  3. Love his thoughtfulness. Very nice six.

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  4. Oh I LIKE it!!! The idea of the "last" first kiss - very cool and well expressed. Looking forward to reading more. Great snippet.

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  5. Oh that last line threw me. Why would she run in terror? Great six!

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