BookReview and Excerpt from A HEART NOT EASILY BROKEN by M.J. Kane

Book Description:

Ebony is a smart, sexy, career-oriented black woman who wants nothing more than a summer fling with a man who challenges her mind and body. What she doesn’t expect is a blond haired, blue-eyed bass player—who won’t take “no” for an answer—to accept the challenge.

When Ebony’s attempt at a brief fling turns into more, despite negative reactions from friends and family, she finds juggling love, family, and career are nothing compared to the ultimate betrayal she endures. Now her dreams spiral into lies and secrets that threaten her future and her best friend’s trust.

My Review for A Heart Not Easily Broken. As always, I just tell you why I like. No spoilers—ever!

Love is Colorblind

Besides the romance, the tragedy, and the triumph, I think one of the things I love most about M.J. Kane’s story is that the non-acceptance doesn’t come from where you think it will.

What we see in A Heart Not Easily Broken are two people with a mutual attraction who are willing to give their relationship a try regardless of what onlookers or even friends and family members think.

But within any relationship, trouble is only a choice away. And when the thumps of opportunity and trust come knocking on the door, Ebony and Brian’s relationship will be put to the test.

A brief excerpt M.J. agreed to share. I had two to pick from but I decided on this one because I think it’ll make you say, “Grrrr…” It did me. Gotta love friends.

He grabbed a bottle of water, gulped, and watched me. “Have you wondered why she’s still with you? I mean, could dating you be an experiment? You know what I’m saying? What if you got all wrapped up and found out she really wants to go back to black?” His chest puffed out. “What if she used you as means to stay busy while waiting for her dream man? I’m sure her parents will have a lot to say about who she marries.” He gathered his towel and strolled back into the house. When he reached the door, he paused. “You might want to see if she cheated while you were gone.”

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My rating: ★★★★★

Sensual Level: Adult

Violence: Depicts some scenes, but stops before graphic

Language: Adult

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